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Wednesday, August 11, 2021

I AM... - A Poem

I am  determined to be the best me possible and protective of my family. 
I  wonder If I can reach my goal.
I hear every student voice, especially if they need help.
I want to become a successful surgeon that helps everyone in need of my help.
I am determined and protective

I actually try to become like my sister, a leader, 
I feel like I could be better.
I am anxious about my education almost everyday.
I cry when I feel like I am not being heard, potentially when I was doing the poetry recital when I was doing the poem, I did it for black people and people who want to give up. Technically, I did it for me not room 4.
I am determined and protective.
I understand my parents.
I say that I will always try to be behaved and I will keep that promise.
I dream that I will be great in the future
I hope it becomes true.
I am determined, protective and many more!!!





Task Description:
We were given the task to do a simple poem talking about ourselves hope you enjoy!!!

3 comments:

  1. KIA Ora Alilia, You really loved ready this blog post you have done, it was one interesting thing i have read in ages. What I really loved about this blog post is that you where using good interesting language. Good job and very interesting work.

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  2. Thank you very much. I'm glad to hear you say nice feedback to my blog.
    Hope you have a nice year!!!!

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  3. Mōrena Alilia, This is a heartfelt post, and you are already great! I love your life long goals and the steps you are taking to achieve them. I also enjoyed your post about cooking, and wonder if next time you post about cooking you could highlight the mathematics even more. For example you used fractions, time and measurement. Kia kaha.

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