A Simple act of Kindness / ~ W R I T I N G ~

Story Context: A Simple act of Kindness

Setting: KFC, home

I am wanting to improve on: Make some short sentences at some points, 

Use new and improved vocabulary,  try out new sentence starters instead of the same.

So actually this is a true story from a two years ago, weather was as beautiful than you can believe, my happiness had arisen when I found out the great news. I found out that all of us siblings actually got a prize last year and my parents were so ecstatic of our achievements. I was proud myself of both me and my siblings. We actually wanted to celebrate  so we went to buy KFC to eat with my whole family. When we went to buy it we met with someone which said she new my mum and it was true. My mum also new her. She was my step auntie on my mum's side and my mum told her the great news. She felt very happy for us. She wanted to actually pay for our food but my mum said no, she did not want her to spend a lot of money on our food. My auntie kept insisting and my mum kept refusing until my auntie paid for it and spoke "It is the least I could do, congratulations and well done children". What she did that day was a very nice gesture. We actually wanted to give back to her so we actually gave her a bowl of trifle. We were happy that she got something back. After that day, she told my mum thank you for the trifle.

Sincerely from : ~Alilia~

[It comes to say that a simple act of kindness can change someone's day in a good way. Just doing something little is worth a lot more than you know. We should spread this happiness and cheer to everyone. Have a great day!!!]