Today, I did a blog comment that had all the statements like positive, thoughtful and helpful. The blog that I commented on was a girl named Ruby from Ohaeawai Primary. She made a very beautiful piece of art. She is a year 4 just like me. I think she will develop more intelligence in the future. Here is what I said.
Kia ora Alilia,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Fiona and I’m from the Summer Learning Journey.
You’ve written a really positive, thoughtful and helpful comment - ka pai! I like the way you introduce yourself, then give positive feedback to Ruby and explain what you like about her blog. It’s also great that you asked a question in your comment, as this could start a comment thread (where you reply to one and other), which is a great way for you to form connections with other student bloggers.
I am so happy to see that you have signed up to participate in the Summer Learning Journey! Remember, if you check out some of the other bloggers’ Summer Learning Journey posts and leave another positive, thoughtful or helpful comment you will receive extra points! If you do this, remember to submit a link to your published comment using this form. .
Keep up the great work and blog you again soon!
Ngā mihi nui,
Fiona (SLJ)