Hey everyone I just finished off my kickstart literacy task. I did writing for a comic book, I looked at the links for all the slides before actually doing them and I did a sort of summary from a story I read. Here is the result.
What a fantastic comic. You’ve done a fabulous job matching the facial expressions of the characters to the captions you have used! Ka pai! I also really like that you described what type of fish the men are looking for, and have made them joke around a bit.
Because you’ve written such a great comic strip, I was wondering, if you could write a comic on absolutely anything, what would you write about? I think I’d write about space adventures and rocket ships.
Maybe you could increase the size of your text so it’s a bit easier to read for your readers. Or you could turn the longer captions into two speech bubbles.
Kia ora Alilia,
ReplyDeleteWhat a fantastic comic. You’ve done a fabulous job matching the facial expressions of the characters to the captions you have used! Ka pai! I also really like that you described what type of fish the men are looking for, and have made them joke around a bit.
Because you’ve written such a great comic strip, I was wondering, if you could write a comic on absolutely anything, what would you write about? I think I’d write about space adventures and rocket ships.
Maybe you could increase the size of your text so it’s a bit easier to read for your readers. Or you could turn the longer captions into two speech bubbles.
Keep up the fantastic work!
Ka kite anō,
Shannon (SLJ)